谢谢各位，我决定还是申诉一下，申诉信如下，请帮忙看一眼吧~Dear Sir/ Madam,

My name is XXX, passport number
XXX. I applied for a visa (application number: XXX) on 11st Decmber,
2013 and got rejected on 12th December, 2013 due to reason NO.8. Regarding to the rejection reason, I hope
the following explanations could be helpful.

 

1, The purpose of this trip is purely
tourism. As a student, I want to be an art reporter after graduation, so
France, as the world’s center of art has always been the country I want to
explore. So I paid a trip to France and Italy last august. It was a nice trip,
but because time was limited, I could only visit northern France (Paris 12 days
+ Lyon 5 days+ Paris 2 days for return flight) and Rome, Florence, Venice in
Italy (14 days in total). Thus this winter I applied to go to southern France and
Spain, visiting the two Picasso museums in Antibes and Barcelona. I hope this
can explain why I applied for French visa twice.

 

2, I am still a student at XXX University of China and I will graduate in July 2015. My faculty, School of
XXXX, ranks NO.1 in China and our graduate students’
placements are quite good. So for sure, I will go back to China and continue my
studies. Besides, I will start my internship at Bloomberg Businessweek
Lifestyle department from June 2014. So this winter will be the last holiday I
have and I truly want to spend it in France and Spain, enjoying the warm
weather there and benefit my future job.

 

3, I have a loving family and a stable
relationship in China. On 12th December 2013, I got a phone call
from the embassy and the lady asked me whether I had a boyfriend in France or
any relatives in Europe. I promise that this should not be your concern as I
have no connections in Europe. My parents are both in China and we have really
close relationship (Photo attached). Besides, I have been with my boyfriend for
more than three years (photo attached). Actually we are planning to discuss
wedding issue with our families during the Spring Festival. He is a Chinese
person and will finish his study in Australia in July 2014. 

 

4, Regarding my unreasonable travel
schedule you mentioned in rejection letter, I have to admit that it is not
detailed enough as I did not have enough time when I applied. So I add many
details, concerning sightseeing places, reasons that I want to go to this place
and transportation. I hope this would help to show that why it is necessary for
me to visit these two countries.

During last application on 12th
December, my mentor was very supportive and approved my leave on January, my English
professor even agreed to postpone my final test, as they have long known my
interest in art report, which unfortunately, I failed to fully explain in the
application. However, with all the additional information, it would be really
nice if I can be given a chance to be reconsidered. If you have any concern
about anything, please contact me.