奶奶给我发美国探亲邀请函，这样写可以吗，急求，谢谢了！
INVATATION
LETTER
From: Xu Daxue
Address: 12 Baldwin Ave Temple
City, CA, 12345-1234, USA
Contact number: Date of Birth: July 9th, 1940Status: permanent resident
Date: May 16th, 2015
Consular
Officer United States Embassy
Shanghai,
China
Dear
Consul,
My
name is Xu Daxue, and I have permanent resident status in the USA. I wish to
invite my grandson to come to USA to see me，and living with me for 10 days
in my rent house at 1234 Baldwin Ave Temple City, CA, 12345-1234, USA. Here is
his information:
First
Name: Xiaoming
Last
Name: Xu
Date
of Birth: November 5th, 1992
Relationship
to me: My grandson.
He
will come to America on 17th, June, and return to China on 27, June. His
parents will pay all the fees for his living and traveling in USA, and the
plane tickets for coming to USA and returning to China. During his staying in
USA, we will visit some view spots in Los Angeles.
Thank
you for your time and consideration of the attached visa application.
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