请各位站内大神帮忙看一下解释信写得行吗
Dear visa officer:
In order to avoid any unnecessary doubt or misunderstanding about my trip,i
will give you a brief explanation of myself:
1.France is famous for its romance and has many amazing sights,so i would love to spend my holiday in your beautiful country.I am also fancy about delicious cuisine and wine. Shopping is also on my to-do-list. To satisfy all my plans, France is my first and best choice.
2.I love independent travel because in this way i can have a deep understanding of local culture. I am surrounded by busy work so i haven’t had a chance to travel abroad but i have a lot of independent travel experience at home.
3.I have a stable job and savings and i cherish my current job. I have a happy family and my parents live in China. Being the only child,i need to take care of them,which means i will back to China on time.
4.Though the property ownership
certificate is under my father’s name, this house is prepared for my wedding
so it is mine. We registered it under my father’s name because there might be
some economic disagreements after i married.
5.
Lastly i want to explain my financial problems. The large sum of income of my
bank account is that my friend just payed back some money lent from me. My
salary will be two times accounted. I also have 30,000RMB bonus every
year,which is payed in cash. My parents offered 10,000RMB for my trip to
France as well. I have exchanged them into Euro Cash, and my credit card can
overdraft 20,000RMB and 2,500Euro Cash. I totally can afford this trip.
I have prepared for this trip thoroughly and
i have booked my plan ticket and the hotel. I really don’t to be caused any
economical loss because of the rejection of my visa. So i sincerely am asking
you to consider my condition. If you have any further doubts, i am ready to
explain anytime. Thank you all! Wish you a happy day!