请各位站内大神帮忙看一下解释信写得行吗
Dear visa officer:
In order to avoid any unnecessary doubt or misunderstanding about my trip,i
will give you a brief explanation of myself:
1.France is famous for its romance and has many amazing sights,so i would love to spend my holiday in your beautiful country.I am also fancy about delicious cuisine and wine. Shopping is also on my to-do-list. To satisfy all my plans, France is my first and best choice.
2.I love independent travel because in this way i can have a deep understanding of local culture. I am surrounded by busy work so i haven’t had a chance to travel abroad but i have a lot of independent travel experience at home.
3.I have a stable job and savings and i cherish my current job. I have a happy family and my parents live in China. Being the only child,i need to take care of them,which means i will back to China on time.