我朋友刚写了一封给VO的陈述信，大家看看有没有什么要修改的地方？准备二签，这样写可以么？

Consular Officer

United States Embassy

CHINA

May11, 2013

Dear Consular Officer,

I am writing this letter for the visa application for my friend, ***.So that he may visit me in July this year.

I am an aupair and come to the US from last year,and I will be back in 5 month.so I and my another aupair friend are planning a trip to CA,and want to invite *** ‘s family come to visit with us,but he has a young boy who was just 3 years old so his wife has to take care of him,so he have to come alone,and he can’t speak English,so this time is a very good chance for he to visit the US,because I can be the guider.

We have made a complete plan which will show you following,our trip will from 29 June to 13 July,and I make sure he will come back to China on time.because his happy family and job,andhis jobdo not allow a longer vecation.And I do believe he will have a great time here and this experience will do good for his little son.

My friend is a very good guy who love his family and do good to his friends,everyone who knows he that think he is so nice,and that is why I want to invite him to come to our trip in CA.

Thanks so much for your time and I truly appreciate your kind consideration and help.

Best regards to you and your family.

Sincerely Yours,

***