我朋友刚写了一封给VO的陈述信，大家看看有没有什么要修改的地方？准备二签，这样写可以么？

Consular Officer

United States Embassy

CHINA

May11, 2013

Dear Consular Officer,

I am writing this letter for the visa application for my friend, ***.So that he may visit me in July this year.

I am an aupair and come to the US from last year,and I will be back in 5 month.so I and my another aupair friend are planning a trip to CA,and want to invite *** ‘s family come to visit with us,but he has a young boy who was just 3 years old so his wife has to take care of him,so he have to come alone,and he can’t speak English,so this time is a very good chance for he to visit the US,because I can be the guider.

We have made a complete plan which will show you following,our trip will from 29 June to 13 July,and I make sure he will come back to China on time.because his happy family and job,andhis jobdo not allow a longer vecation.And I do believe he will have a great time here and this experience will do good for his little son.

My friend is a very good guy who love his family and do good to his friends,everyone who knows he that think he is so nice,and that is why I want to invite him to come to our trip in CA.

Thanks so much for your time and I truly appreciate your kind consideration and help.

Best regards to you and your family.

Sincerely Yours,

***

邀请人没有提供让人信服的信息。
资产也不过硬，不能让人相信去了会回来。
邀请人士个女的也不无关系。
自己把问题搞复杂了，旅游签证就不需要邀请的。
等房子过户了再办吧。
有稳定收入的话，银行流水账带好，单位证明开好。
不能怪成都拒签率高，出示100万资产人家当然觉得你更有可能黑仔那里。
财产也不是越多越好。

我是成都10号早上10.30签的。我是单人去旅游的B2，VO只说了3句话就秒过，VO；到美国做什么，我；旅游.VO;你自己怎么游，我；和朋友一起，从洛杉矶到盐湖城到黄石公园，那边很漂亮。VO;是很漂亮，祝你旅途愉快！

我5.10早上预约的7点，而且我去了排在了7点那一批的第一个人，我和老婆，进去后排队很久，到8点才开始签，最后不到30秒就结束了，秒过。我觉得中介的话真的不要听，自己准备再去签比较好。

你这签过率应该很高的。 别紧张实话实说就行。


不过你朋友这封信写的一般般。

先去别的国家转转，过段时间再美签吧，不然，浪费大家资源

這封英文新的文法與拼字諸多錯誤，建議重新檢查一次吧~~

這封信的錯誤真的蠻多的。

旅游不需要邀请函啊

旅游不需要邀请函啊

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【签证类型】：美国个人旅游签证
【入境次数】：多次
【停留时间】：180天（具体海关批）
【有 效 期】：10年有效
【办理时长】：12-20个工作日（面试后8-10工作日）
【是否面试】：是
【送签领区】：广州领区/上海领区/北京领区/成都领区
【受理范围】：不分领区，全国各省份颁发护照就近办理。